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March 5, 2009
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Feb 19, 2009, 7:22:20 PM
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I was taking pictures during Fencing practice one day and got this really great shot of the club leader (right) and his opponent and decided to draw them without drawing them lol. i loved the way their bodies and shadows came out but i'm still not sure if i like the fact that i didnt swirl the whole page yet.

so to whoever sees this-what do you think? should i finish it? or just leave it as is?
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~warm grin~ That rocks.
As for the swirls, I'd say extend them to close the gap between the two fencers, and to heck with the rest of the page; kindof suggests the energy between the opponents, and their grounding in their surroundings.

Awesome piece. :)
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~Starfire1003 Apr 2, 2009   Digital Artist
thanks so much :hug:! i'm glad you like it and thank you so much for the feedback i shall give it a try and see what it looks like.
im so glad you like it and thanks so much for the :+fav:!!

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:icondreamerzina:
I think either way would be cool. I like the contrast and I think the unfinished look makes for a nice effect because it's a nice use of positive and negative space.

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~Starfire1003 Mar 22, 2009   Digital Artist
Thank you!!

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you're welcome. =)

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:iconalixiel:
swirling the whole page would be cool :)

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~Starfire1003 Mar 13, 2009   Digital Artist
I'll keep that in mind. Thank You!
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